Haiku in English

[persefone]

Never mind Arwen
Just a misunderstanding
We can still be friends

[Katia]

Living on my own
Feeling strong and cute
Flying far, high

[Arwen_77]

Thanks persefone You're great:D !

Beautiful Katia...

Another one


Sunny Sunday
friends and smiles in the village
good, small pleassures

[persefone]

A day spent inside
Trying to tidy the flat
Guests coming next week

[lucia]

Definition of a haiku is in the first message ,though that one is quite strict and I gave another one later. We have a sub-forum here to write our own poems (Los foreros escriben y dibujan). We do like to do it, and we've already written many haikus in Spanish. I just thought it would be fun to do it also in English. Why daft? I don't get your point. We've already written some haikus in messages above.

Arwen, it's a haiku.

Think of it as British humour.

[Arwen_77]

Definition of a haiku is in the first message ,though that one is quite strict and I gave another one later. We have a sub-forum here to write our own poems (Los foreros escriben y dibujan). We do like to do it, and we've already written many haikus in Spanish. I just thought it would be fun to do it also in English. Why daft? I don't get your point. We've already written some haikus in messages above.

Arwen, it's a haiku.

Think of it as British humour.

I know, I know, I made a very silly mistake. I deserve to be laughed at

[Arwen_77]

Shame on me
for my fears and my restraints
want to break free

[Arwen_77]

Grayish rainy day
sky pushing into me like doom
I peer out and cry

[Arwen_77]

Bewitched and charmed
I wandered through unreal landscapes
pursuing my dreams.

[Arwen_77]

Sweet white snow
remembrence of gay games and childhood
dirt covered in dreams

[Assai]

Wow, I've just read this whole thread, and I love it!

I used to write haikus in English myself (a couple of years ago), and, well... , here are some of them. Disclaimer: I usually write them rather free, in verse as much as in topic.

Feelings have colours,
Violins paint mind's landscapes.
All's beautifully enhanced.

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Waves of ice emerge,
As the music of cold flows
In comforting blue.

[lucia]

The second one is lovely

[Assai]

The second one is lovely

Thanks, Lucia .

[xabeltrán]

Those haikus are amazing, guys.

I don't think I can write one.

[Arwen_77]

Thanks Assai! Yours are beautiful!!

Xabeltran! Come on and try! I'm sure you can do it....


Seasons changing
light , wind and a long way
changing heart.