Haiku in English
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Thanks persefone You're great:D !
Beautiful Katia...
Another one
Sunny Sunday
friends and smiles in the village
good, small pleassures
Beautiful Katia...
Another one
Sunny Sunday
friends and smiles in the village
good, small pleassures
Re: Haiku in English
persefone escribió:Arwen, it's a haiku.Arwen_77 escribió: Definition of a haiku is in the first message ,though that one is quite strict and I gave another one later. We have a sub-forum here to write our own poems (Los foreros escriben y dibujan). We do like to do it, and we've already written many haikus in Spanish. I just thought it would be fun to do it also in English. Why daft? I don't get your point. We've already written some haikus in messages above.
Think of it as British humour.
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Re: Haiku in English
lucia escribió:persefone escribió:Arwen, it's a haiku.Arwen_77 escribió: Definition of a haiku is in the first message ,though that one is quite strict and I gave another one later. We have a sub-forum here to write our own poems (Los foreros escriben y dibujan). We do like to do it, and we've already written many haikus in Spanish. I just thought it would be fun to do it also in English. Why daft? I don't get your point. We've already written some haikus in messages above.
Think of it as British humour.
I know, I know, I made a very silly mistake. I deserve to be laughed at
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Shame on me
for my fears and my restraints
want to break free
for my fears and my restraints
want to break free
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Grayish rainy day
sky pushing into me like doom
I peer out and cry
sky pushing into me like doom
I peer out and cry
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Bewitched and charmed
I wandered through unreal landscapes
pursuing my dreams.
I wandered through unreal landscapes
pursuing my dreams.
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Sweet white snow
remembrence of gay games and childhood
dirt covered in dreams
remembrence of gay games and childhood
dirt covered in dreams
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Wow, I've just read this whole thread, and I love it!
I used to write haikus in English myself (a couple of years ago), and, well... , here are some of them. Disclaimer: I usually write them rather free, in verse as much as in topic.
Feelings have colours,
Violins paint mind's landscapes.
All's beautifully enhanced.
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Waves of ice emerge,
As the music of cold flows
In comforting blue.
I used to write haikus in English myself (a couple of years ago), and, well... , here are some of them. Disclaimer: I usually write them rather free, in verse as much as in topic.
Feelings have colours,
Violins paint mind's landscapes.
All's beautifully enhanced.
****************
Waves of ice emerge,
As the music of cold flows
In comforting blue.
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The second one is lovely
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Those haikus are amazing, guys.
I don't think I can write one.
I don't think I can write one.
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Thanks Assai! Yours are beautiful!!
Xabeltran! Come on and try! I'm sure you can do it....
Seasons changing
light , wind and a long way
changing heart.
Xabeltran! Come on and try! I'm sure you can do it....
Seasons changing
light , wind and a long way
changing heart.